My Metacognition
Student's Name: Santana
Date: May 4 2012
This sample of my work shows my ability to: Conquer the world, That i am able to write a Fictional Narrative. What i will be like in 20 years.
The steps that I took to produce this work
were: Think,layout. I had to brainstorm and really think.
I think that this piece illustrates my ability to
do the following things especially well: That, i can do anything i put my mind to do.
If I had more time to work on this project, I
would have. . . Made it better. i would have wrote more. i would have made it longer, and finish it.
I probably could use a little more practice or help in the following areas: I can have worked harder on the dialogue. i could have worked more on my conclusion, and beginning.
ME IN 20 YEARS
I was on my way to my friends house and it was a bright and sunny morning in california,the wind was blowing kinda strongly.it was getting really hot.so when i took off my jacket,the wind blew it away, i went afther my jacket,suddleny stop running when I found a old, dusty, time machine.i saw my friend walking towards me,she called my name then she started running towards me.
she asked me "what are you looking at"
i said," a time machine"
she laughed,when i picked up the paper , that was underneath the machine,i blew the dust off of it. it said time mechine that will take you to the 20 years... i could not see the rest.my friend asiana had black hair,she was wearing a dark blue shirt,with a pair of black jeans,to complete that outfit she had on a bright orange jacket that said Old Navy.
She said "how does it work"
I said "I dont know, i think we have to push a button.
She said"which one"
I said "I think that big blue button that lights up"
She said" push the button
I said" ok i will"
i push the button.this blue and purple glowing light came up.
She said "um... Santana what do we do now''?
I said "lets go in"
She said"ok but are you sure about this"
I said"I am sure we will be back in time"
She said"lets go"
We walk in the time machine, we were in a alley. Then suddenly there was a big earthquake and the floor opened up, and I saw the 20 year old me fall inside the ground. The time machine was about to fall and break.
I had to make a choice, save me or older me? I grabbed my older me hand and pulled her up. She was wondering who I was, I did not tell her. I told her what was going on. She said she knew a guy who can help us. She told the guy and he built one. I did not want to go inside, so I was feeling kind of weird. I had to stay in the future cause I broke the time machine.
she asked me "what are you looking at"
i said," a time machine"
she laughed,when i picked up the paper , that was underneath the machine,i blew the dust off of it. it said time mechine that will take you to the 20 years... i could not see the rest.my friend asiana had black hair,she was wearing a dark blue shirt,with a pair of black jeans,to complete that outfit she had on a bright orange jacket that said Old Navy.
She said "how does it work"
I said "I dont know, i think we have to push a button.
She said"which one"
I said "I think that big blue button that lights up"
She said" push the button
I said" ok i will"
i push the button.this blue and purple glowing light came up.
She said "um... Santana what do we do now''?
I said "lets go in"
She said"ok but are you sure about this"
I said"I am sure we will be back in time"
She said"lets go"
We walk in the time machine, we were in a alley. Then suddenly there was a big earthquake and the floor opened up, and I saw the 20 year old me fall inside the ground. The time machine was about to fall and break.
I had to make a choice, save me or older me? I grabbed my older me hand and pulled her up. She was wondering who I was, I did not tell her. I told her what was going on. She said she knew a guy who can help us. She told the guy and he built one. I did not want to go inside, so I was feeling kind of weird. I had to stay in the future cause I broke the time machine.